Friday, February 1, 2013

Trifextra Week 53: Set 'em Up, And Knock 'em Down


"You help her get the job knowing his weakness for hot girls. He harrasses her; gets fired... You waltz in and take his job."

"You act like I orchestrated it all..."

"Didn't you?"

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This is my entry for this weekend's Trifextra at TrifectaWritingChallenge.com.

This weekend's contest is to write exactly 33 words of dialogue. What do you think? Please comment! Also, please consider joining in! It's fun; good writing practice; and you meet cool people!

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26 comments:

  1. conspiracy theory...with a personal, um, touch

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    1. If it was a conspiracy and she really was the puppet master. Maybe it just happened. :)

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  2. All in how you justify... Good one!

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    1. She needed the money for a sick friend. LOL!

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  3. Wow- how conniving and manipulative...I think I used to work with this person!

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  4. truly machiavellian (yeah, I'm sure that is spelt wrong)

    :) well done.

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    1. You spelled it right! And, thank you for the kind words :)

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  5. Love such wicked twists-that's what real life is all about nowadays at least-conspiracy,plotting,scandals...;-)Well executed:-)

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    1. Thanks - this story is actually taken from real life - LOL!

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  6. Very clever! And I can just imagine it..

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  7. Ooooo... I really love this. The sneakiness and evilness of it all.

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  8. Very interesting idea. :)
    memyselfandela

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  9. What a bunch of naughty Trifectans we have this week! Love this. Great use of dialogue!

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  10. Ooooooh, devious! A devilishly good response!

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  11. This is great, paints a whole story with so few words. :)

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  12. Sounds about right. Well done. 1966

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